（看看你是不是也经常犯这些错误呢，要警惕了（几乎囊括了所有易错点，收好不谢（替孩子收好把）））(避免这些错误，作文能拿满分)
书面表达典型错误例析
（1） 审题不到位
A． 人称错误：有些考题要求考生使用第一人称，而很多同学没有看清要求而采用了第三人称来叙述，分数就大打折扣了，这样的结果是非常可惜的。
B． 时态错误：很多看图作文大部分应使用一般过去时，注意时态统一。而有些应用文，比如写一篇关于某活动的书面通知，很明显基本时态应用一般将来时，而有的考生却用了一般过去时，这是严重错误的。
C． 要点遗漏：这种情况主要出现在看图作文，或半命题作文中，题目一般会给出要点，考生如果没有仔细审题，很可能遗漏关键要点，而作文给分原则之一就是要点要描述到位，根据要点给分，所以遗漏要点所扣的分值较大。
D． 格式错误：这种情况一般出现在应用文中，如没有按照正确的通知格式，书信格式书写，也会扣除相应的分值。
（2） 受汉语影响，翻译过程中产生的语法错误（几乎是绝大部分考生都容易犯的错误）
A. 缺少句子成分
a. 缺句子主语
(X) But was already 6 o’clock.
(√)But it was already 6 o’clock.
b. 缺句子谓语
(X) I often by bike to factory.
(√)I often ride a bike to factory.
c. 缺句子宾语
(X) He seated on the ground.
(√)He seated himself on the ground.
B. 受汉语思维，多用了句子成分或某些介词
a. 重复用相同意义词汇
(X) He returned back the day before yesterday.
(√)He returned the day before yesterday.
b. 简单句出现两个谓语（最常见错误）
(X) There were lots of people died in the war.
(√)There were lots of people who died in the war.(简单句中出现两个谓语动词时要借用从句表达)
c. 宾语重复叠加
(X) He dressed his clothes slowly.
(√)He dressed slowly.
d. 误用介词，画蛇添足
(X) We must serve for the people heart and soul.
(√)We must serve the people heart and soul.
C. 直译过程中用词不当及一些词性，语态错误
a. 主语使用不当
(X) My work is very busy.teacheray.com
(√)I am very busy with my work.
b. 谓语使用不当
(X) Time past quickly.(past是介词，不能用作谓语成分)
(√)Time passed quickly.
c. 宾语使用不当
(X) My father patted Mary’s shoulder.
(√)My father patted Mary on the shoulder.
d. 表语使用不当
(X) The price of my clothes is expensive.
(√)The price of my clothes is high.
e. 定语使用不当
(X) She has a hot body temperature.
(√)She has a high body temperature.
f. 介词使用不当
(X) Don’t read under the sunlight.
(√)Don’t read in the sunlight.
g. 动词使用不当
(X) I have borrowed the book for a month.(borrow为瞬间动词，不能用于完成时接时间段)
(√)I have kept the book for a month.（keep为延续性动词，可以接时间段）
h. 语态使用错误
(X) We watched the bus till it was disappeared.
(√)We watched the bus till it disappeared.(无需用被动语态)
D. 句子成分搭配不当的错误
a. 主谓使用不当
(X) My homeland has taken place great changes.
(√)Great changes has taken place in my homeland.
b. 动宾使用不当
(X) We want to see TV this afternoon.( see强调结果，不能用于看电视)
(√)We want to watch TV this afternoon.（watch强调过程，为正确搭配）
c. 系表使用不当
(X) My dream has become true.
(√)My dream has come true.
E. 采用中国式英语翻译生搬硬套
很多同学不善于用英语的基本句式和习惯表达方式，而采取中国式英语生搬硬套，进而出现直译，硬译的句子，换句话说，就是用汉语语序+英语单词的方式翻译文中要点，写出来的句子读来令人啼笑皆非，这种情况较容易出现在基础知识极不扎实的同学身上，有需求的同学可以翻看我之前发表的一篇文章<<初中英语四大句式，超级实用，掌握透彻考试不用愁>>.
(X) She has possible go abroad.
(√)It is possible /likely that she will go abroad.
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